Writing Prompt: HOURGLASS
Provided By: Pencilgirl, a fellow A-Z participant whose posts I’ve been following. Visit her! Also, I need prompts between R and Z!
Genre: Fiction/FLash
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It was once not unusual for Dina to wait for Raoul in his study. When they were still children, and the study belonged to Raoul’s father, Uncle Robert, Dina holed up and waited for Raoul to come home from school, watching the hourglass and matching the trickle of sand to the minutes and seconds on the clock.
The companion of her childhood vigils was too physical a reminder of time trickling away for her, Raoul, and everyone else. It had already run out for Robert Umbridge, who lay stiff and blood-spattered upon the dining-table at her place.
She had to stop thinking about it, because when the butler carried word to Raoul she was here, in tears, he would hurry back from the stable. She would have to tell him all about it.
Her hands played with brass knobs on the table drawers. They felt cold and heavy in her hands, like her heart. As she sat watching the trickle of the sand in the hourglass. It seemed to glow blue, then flicker. She blinked to clear her eyes.
Without warning, one of the drawers slid out. Amongst the papers with the Umbridge family crest, her eyes fell on her name. Raoul’s strong hand on a plain brown envelope: Dina Middleton.
Without pause, she tore the envelope and read:
If you have this in your hand, Father is dead, I’m on the run, and They’re coming for you. I’m sorry I couldn’t do better than this Dina, but I knew you would come to the study. I wish I could tell you more, but right now, do not go back home. RUN. No, wait, take the hourglass. It will protect you.
Before she knew it, Dina had grabbed the letter and the hourglass, wrapped them in her scarf, and jumped out of the window. In the darkness of the evening the hourglass glowed blue through her scarf, but she paid it no mind.
Turning, she caught a glimpse of the butler at the study door, and behind him, figures in black, gleaming swords in hand.
She ran into the woods behind the house of Umbridge, unaware that Raoul stalked her, sword at the ready.
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I’m tweeting A to Z posts at #atozchallenge. And there’s also the Twitter A toZ Challenge Daily.
Thanks and shout-outs to organisers Arlee Bird (Tossing It Out) , Jeffrey Beesler’s (World of the Scribe), Alex J. Cavanaugh (Alex J. Cavanaugh) , Jen Daiker ( Unedited), Candace Ganger (The Misadventures in Candyland) , Karen J Gowen (Coming Down the Mountain) , Talli Roland , Stephen Tremp (Breakthrough Blogs )


I wish each one of these were a novel. I would read them all.
Thanks, Dafeenah. That made my day
Wow!! That was terrific!!



I love thrillers.. It’s so cool that you can write such an interesting, intriguing piece with so few words!!
Awesome post!!
Thanks, your prompt was inspiring, as are your comments. They give me the vim to keep going!
Wow!
That’s a great H word and an even better story. Loved it!
Thanks Talli! It means a lot that a writer like you likes my work!
I am really so glad to have connected with you. Reading your posts is inspirational in how you can just hook people in like you do.
Love this story, like all you’ve done.
Thanks. I wring my hands a lot while writing these, and it feels nice to be validated. Glad you enjoyed the story
Loved the treachery in this! Excellent twist. It would be a great opening for a novel!
LOL…don’t know if I have enough sustained writing in me for a novel. But I guess I’ll find out very soon. Thanks for stopping by and the comment!
ooh, thrilling and you left us hanging! I like.
p.s. your answer has been posted.
Thanks
And I went and read your reply!
So cool (and challenging) to do flash fiction for your A-Z! Really enjoying them!
EJ
Appreciate it!
Thanks, both for your visit and comment
I don’t know how, but you seem to catch me off-guard with every story. I never quite know where it’s headed. Excellent, as always!
Thanks, Nate, that’s very sweet of you to say that
. I try. Hope you keep visiting.
you have so many stories. how do you come up with them all!
happy h day!
I don’t know Tara, they come by themselves. I make sure I wait for them
Intrigue…
Wagging Tales – Blog for Writers
I’m glad this intrigued you
Oh! That last line slammed into me like Raoul’s sword. Well done!
Thanks Alex. The ending changed thrice before this one came:)
We want more! More!
Ellie Garratt
I guess you will have more for all the rest of the days of A-Z!
Your stories are fascinating. I read back posts as long as my time allowed and I was taken in with each one. Thank you for visiting my blog so that I was able to meet you.
Manzanita
Wanna buy a duck
Thanks Manzanita, hope you come back to read more.
Stopped by after reading an AtoZ tweet. Wonderful writing.
Joyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com
Thanks Joyce, please stop anytime.
Oh i hope this doesn’t go to spam again.
I looove this post. And all I can say is, what happens next?? I need to know the rest of this story!
nutschell
http://www.thewritingnut.com
It did go into spam again, but I rescued it:). Thank you so much for coming by to comment the second time. Now that it has been taken out of spam, should not happen if you choose to comment again!
This story based on the Hourglass prompt is such a tease, lol. You kept the reader’s attention from beginning to end. I may have to try and get you to collaborate with me on some projects!
Here are some prompts that I came up with for you to use for the challenge:
R-Railroad
S-Sailor
T-Tinsel
U-Ugly
V-Vindictive
W-Water
X-X-ray
Y-Yo-Yo
Z-Zoo
……hope this helps!
Oh, Nicole! Bless you for the prompts…I am so stuck with some of the letters, this would indeed help!
Just finding you through the A to Z Challenge and your comments on another blog I follow. Wow – a daily blog even without the challenge – quite impressive!!! I’ve just subscribed to your site by e-mail so I look forward to reading your posts.
Let’s see about those R to Z prompts –
R – ruckus
S – slighted
T – tossing and turning
U – underwhelmed
V – vociferous
W – wacky
X – xerox
Y – yap
Z – zen
Good luck for continued success with the challenge! I’ll be reading!
~Alana
writercize.blogspot.com
Love the mystery and suspense, great to pop back by!
So each of your posts are flash fiction? That’s great, and so was this story. Thank you so very much for your kind words on my “I” blog entry about Indian cuisine.
May I contribute some “prompts” for your R-Z dilemma?
Rituals. Sanity. Turmoil. Urgency. Validation. Wistful. Xenophobia. Yearning. Zamboni.
Maybe you have some for the letter J thru Y (except for K)? Food related in some way.
Nice flash! It’s detailed, and I always love a good twist at the end. Well constructed and executed (no pun intended).
The amazing thing about your A-Z posts is that each one reads like a full-blown story that we’ve opened up to at some random page. It feels as though a lot of things have gone on before, and a lot more is about to happen. You must be working harder at these than you’re admitting — maybe even harder than you know. Great work, Damyanti.
Thanks, Charles. Your words mean a lot to me, because I have read your work, and have nothing but great respect for you as a writer. You’re right, these are getting more time and attention, mostly cos I’m scheduling them in advance, and can tweak them a little before they get published. It is good practice, and I’m betting if I keep working at it, one day my Muse will do my bidding.
That Raoul…
Cracking piece of writing